I think that what you published was actually very reasonable. But, think about this, suppose you were to write a killer headline? I ain't saying your information is not good, however what if you added a title that makes people want more? I mean %BLOG_TITLE% is a little boring. You might look at Yahoo's front page and see how they create post titles to get people to open the links. You might add a video or a picture or two to get readers interested about everything've got to say. In my opinion, it would make your posts a little bit more interesting.
